I found first one most appropriate:
1) We acknowledge that communication technologies are not *always* neutral
and can exacerbate unequal power relations in the community.
On Sat, 10 Dec 2016 at 23:28, Nicolás Echániz <nicoechaniz(a)altermundi.net>
wrote:
Some of us, including Raoul, discussed this
further over dinner and
arrived to shared understanding on this alternative:
"We acknowledge that the impact of communication technology is not
neutral and can exacerbate unequal power relations in the community."
If no one has a strong need to oppose this, maybe we can consider the
discussion closed and update the pad accordingly.
Cheers and safe trip home for everyone flying back from the IGF.
Nico
On December 10, 2016 7:21:54 PM CST, Raoul Plommer <plommer(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
Dear all,
There was quite a bit of disagreement on the language used in the
declaration, partially because the sentence was added there only today,
without the acceptance wider community. I think it was poor judgement to
add it today without any discussion with all the members of our Dynamic
Coalition. However, now that it's out there, and we ended up spending
almost two hours of our precious time on these sudden additions, we might
as well include this, admittedly fair point. Here are my proposals of the
different variations on just one sentence that could be used instead.
One of the sentences that was discussed, is as follows:
*"We acknowledge that communication technology is not neutral and can
exacerbate unequal power relations in the community."*
...and here are my suggestions. I wrote the crucial changes in bold:
<
div>1)
We acknowledge that communication technologies are not *always* neutral
and can exacerbate unequal power relations in the community.
2) We acknowledge that the *usage* of communication technology is not
neutral and can exacerbate unequal power relations in the community.
3) We acknowledge that *community networks* are not neutral and can
exacerbate unequal power relations in the community.
As you can see, my suggestions are not making that much change to the
spirit of the meaning, but just wording it differently will actually make
our statement more accurate and popular, as well as less controversial. The
declaration should really alienate as few people as possible and we really
need to keep that in mind, while still making a definitive statement that
is actually saying something.
I.e. the hammer itself IS neutral (although people with no hands won't
be able
to use
it properly. Also, we're all babies at some point and babies won't be
able to lift the hammer). It is really the usage of the hammer that can be
used in non-neutral way and is the most important acknowledgement, that we
DO need for this specific declaration. My first suggestion captures this
point of view sufficiently enough.
I feel that *all* of us agreed on the spirit of the sentence, and I
also think that my first suggestion is the one that would really be the
best for our purposes. It takes into the account the fact, that community
networks can be misused (for example, in an unequal way considering
gender), but it's *not* saying that community networks are not neutral
by default. Even if they were (and I don't think they are), I feel that's
an unnecessarily negative statement and we should avoid those in our
otherwise very positive vision.
Somebody suggested to use a differentiating platform (like GitHub?
) for
the comparison of the crucial sentences and paragraphs in the
declaration and I think that's a very good idea. Then we can vote on
different versions of them and decide which ones are the best for our
purposes. We obviously need to build consensus on our constitution and
hopefully the output of that will be a declaration/constitution that we can
all agree on.
Thanks,
-Raoul
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